My Beautiful Garden by Areeba Aqua
I was sitting in my beautiful Garden
Digging sand and pouring water
There I saw a bizarre scene
That garden creature began to Sing
When the adorable flowers are swaying
Singing the song of “Beauty of love”
When sweet fragrance spread out
To wake up the chirping birds
A butterfly flaps their colourful wings
Fly up and such up the sweet nectars
And the bees are buzzing all along
The trees are dancing and enjoy the song
This moment captivated in my core of heart
I like this poem too. It puts a vivid image in my mind when I read it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very lovely poem. Its really raw, like the nature its describing. Its cool.
ReplyDeleteI, along with these two, enjoy this song. The setting is wonderfully described and is made with descriptions that we all understand and can enjoy.
ReplyDeleteI like this poem a lot compared to some of the others I've read on here. :)
ReplyDeleteI thought this poem was beautiful, great choice :)
ReplyDeleteI feel like I'm just an echo, echoing the thoughts of those who've already posted, but I thought the poem you chose was really good as well. I think this was said too, but I really liked the imagery she used. I kind of really wonder what garden creature it was that began to sing. I don't know, just something to think about...
ReplyDeleteWell she's pretty descriptive all other times, so I think that's where our imaginations should step in. :)
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